Scene02_nyc

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  1. The Fox And King The Fox And King

    Another scene from the titles (attached).

    Super pressed for time, but feel like it needs more activity or a NYC feel. Thoughts?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Andy Rossi Andy Rossi

    Maybe a pedestrian or two in the background, pushed back? Looks great!

    over 1 year ago

  3. Nathan Walker Nathan Walker

    Uh maybe the NYC Skyline? Or is that too cliché?

    over 1 year ago

  4. Timothy J. Reynolds Timothy J. Reynolds

    Bet one more layer of skyline will do it. Denser.

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  5. The Fox And King The Fox And King

    @Andy Rossi nice, like that.

    @Nathan Walker I wanted to keep it kind of uniform buildings wise (across the scenes for time sake), but could definitely do that.

    @Timothy J. Reynolds definitely. Faded a bit more, perhaps a stand out or two.

    Was thinking of some steam in the foreground too? And maybe a dude taking up half the screen hailing a cab.

    Ahh time restraints!

    over 1 year ago

  6. Andy Rossi Andy Rossi

    @Glenn Thomas - I bet that a wind-swept newspaper page would really add some motion, too. Time restraint challenge: accepted. :)

    over 1 year ago

  7. Jeff Buchanan Jeff Buchanan

    I really like the use of light in your work. It's so...atmospheric

    over 1 year ago

  8. Luke Bott Luke Bott

    This stuff has been really rad man!

    over 1 year ago

  9. Kevin Boodtama Kevin Boodtama

    The shapes, textures, and lighting are all spectacular. But I think the reason it doesn't "feel" like NYC is because the buildings all look so far away. From that perspective, you should only see the front of one or two buildings towering above you; here it looks like you're outside of the city looking in.

    Also a couple other nitpicky things: the sign says one way, but cars are moving in both directions, and since it looks like they're in the middle of an intersection, shouldn't that light be red?

    But seriously, this looks so good! And the ideas posted above would totally help.

    over 1 year ago

  10. The Fox And King The Fox And King

    @Kevin Boodtama awesome Kevin - right on.

    over 1 year ago

  11. nidhi chanani nidhi chanani

    @Glenn Thomas these pieces are really wonderful. i think maybe adding windows to the buildings would give it more visual interest - some with lights on, some off?
    either way i love your shapes and lighting. wonderful work!

    over 1 year ago

  12. Daryl Ginn Daryl Ginn

    Beautiful.

    over 1 year ago

  13. William Dalebout William Dalebout

    This is some very powerful kung fu!!!

    over 1 year ago

  14. Salto Salto

    Wooow!

    over 1 year ago

  15. Mike Busby Mike Busby

    Very cool!

    over 1 year ago

  16. Matthew Wiard Matthew Wiard

    Love the texture, looks fantastic!

    over 1 year ago

  17. Tim Smith Tim Smith

    This is beautiful!!

    over 1 year ago

  18. Connor Fleming Connor Fleming

    For a quick addition you could always throw a plane or two flying in the background?

    over 1 year ago

  19. Marin Sotirov Marin Sotirov

    sh*t yeah!

    over 1 year ago

  20. Joaquim Marques Nielsen Joaquim Marques Nielsen

    Great piece, but that pole to the left is kind of annoying to the eye. Maybe it's just me? Maybe it's because it's too crowded with papers?

    over 1 year ago

  21. The Fox And King The Fox And King

    @Joaquim Marques Nielsen thanks man - this was eventually replaced with v2 of NYC.

    over 1 year ago

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