Planned Parenthood

9 Responses

1. Ricky Linn

   Thanks to everyone who's been keeping up with this project and giving me feedback!

   Going back and polishing the elephants. I wanted the white ear marks to be an allusion to speech bubble marks, but I realize it's a bit of a stretch.

   I added in the lines on their trunks to really emphasize they're elephants and not whales...

   Feedback, thoughts, and crits are encouraged as always.

   9 months ago

2. Allen Lawson

   Maybe make the lines on the Elephants a little more "damaged" give them a feel. Make 'em slanted, add random ones, etc. I have really been enjoying your progression through this.

   Keep up the great work ✌

   9 months ago

3. Kyle Decker

   Definitely an elephant now, and not a whale. Good thought on the lines.

   9 months ago

4. Nikita Lebedev

   @Ricky Linn, I don't think the lines are necessary, keep it simple.

   I like the little elephant doesn't have a tusk (your first attempts), that makes me think about a baby with his mother. Now I see both parents, just a thought.

   9 months ago

5. Dario Calonaci

   Elephants are back!!! Yay!

   9 months ago

6. Alex Parker ⇢ ☁

   Lets talk about the elephant(s) in the room...

   ... they look great!

   9 months ago

7. Max Di Capua

   Lines most definitely emphasise the whale… in my opinion it pulls it away form the quotation marks a lot.

   Aesthetically it's fucking gorgeous :)

   9 months ago

8. Nate Luetkehans

   Hey! I'm also with Nikita on this one Ricky. I think simple is better in this case for sure.

   I also felt like it read more like an elephant when the tusk was further down on the face and not so triangular. I know you're alluding to speech bubbles by doing that, but since it's such a stretch maybe it's not worth sacrificing the read of the elephant.

   It could be nice to play with the size/position/shape of the eyes a little bit as well to inject a little more personality. Could the child be looking to the mother or some other gesture in that way?

   Just a thought, this is looking great dude!

   9 months ago

9. Planned Parenthood I think this is the best iteration so far but it's starting to look too cute...?

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   Planned Parenthood

   by Ricky Linn

   I think this is the best iteration so far but it's starting to look too cute...?

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   9 months ago