Update to a logo I'm working on for my class. I'm pretty new at making scripts so any criticism would be awesome!
about 1 year ago
I think you can manage this issue nicely...
the "a"'s are a bit heavy. maybe allow the "ce" "te" flow into the hoop of the "e" more seamlessly? maybe have the wave on the tail of the "g" go behind rather than in front? its looking really good man
What @Jay ^ said. Everything looks great, but those "a's" are just a tad too heavy.
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