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Nathan Walker
So for an advertising assignment at school we were tasked with creating an identity and advertisement for a biodegradable water bottle. This is the simple logo I came up with... There is an accompanying advertisement which I may post in the near future.
8 months ago
Reminds me of http://dribbble.com/shots/420515-Evoke-Final
I like it!
8 months ago
This would be nicer if the drop was more drop like, it seems far too fat on the top half.
8 months ago
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Lukas Rybacki
Hey @Nathan Walker love the simplicity, but not really happy with the drop shape though, if you would ask me.
8 months ago
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James Fletcher
Simple
8 months ago
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Guido Bouman
My tips:
Make the drop more "elegant", as in make the flow from top tip to the widest point more subtle. Also move the drop a bit down in the O to reflect gravity a bit.
The skewed leg of the R looks off, did you customise it?
8 months ago
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Nathan Walker
@Guido Thanks for the feedback man, and no, it's not customized.
8 months ago
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Tanveer Junayed
Nice concept!
8 months ago
I would go bolder on the drop, make it stand out more. Play around with the typography, maybe find a font that would carry the word better, more rounded edges- not so sharp as the one used here.
I would:
1.Maybe blow up the letter "O" and make it circular, also make the counter bigger (Thats the hole inside the "O" work those beziels to perfection the drop, it looks squeezed.
2. Change the font and work a little bit either customizing the font. Look at kerning etc.
Nice idea, reminds me of Statoil Fuel & Retail Logo (Norway biggest gasproducer)
https://www.statoil.no/FrontServlet?s=sdh&state=sdh_dynamic&viewid=2038910
Its got potensial, and with more work it will look good.
8 months ago
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Michael Topschij
Man, I would love to see how you stack up against other students in your design class. Top of the class I assume.
5 months ago
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Nathan Walker
@Michael Topschij Haha don't mean to brag, but yeah, I may have destroyed the rest of the class.
5 months ago
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Michael Topschij
@Nathan Walker I can only imagine. :)
5 months ago
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Drop - Significantly Less
by Nathan Walker
Said I'd upload this some time ago, and I just remembered about it, and really wanted to show you guys. School assignment haha. So this is the accompanying advertisement that was required - The brief: To advertise a product of your choice, from a list of product categories. I chose biodegradable water bottle, as you can see.
I highly suggest you check it out on a Retina display, it does look really nice :) I've attached the high res version.
Feedback?
4 months ago