Two variations of a logotype I am working through for Clayton Correia. Still a few tweaks to make with lineweight etc, but I'd love to hear your feedback. (:
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over 1 year ago
Great to see this Terra, I really like the top one (I like the idea of what you've done with the extended strokes on the bottom one, especially over the 'o', but I think it feels a little crowded overall). Really love how you've balanced out the start and end with the similar curve and ball terminals in the 'f' and 't' – beautiful touch!
Since you mentioned you're still tweaking, I'd suggest bringing the 'f-l' a little closer and the 'w-b' a bit further apart. The line weight is looking really nice overall, it feels sturdy without being heavy. The 'b' just seems a little too bold, especially the lower part of the bowl (compared to the 'f' in particular).
@Claire Coullon Thanks so much for your feedback Claire, I really appreciate the time you take to write out what you think! Definitely see what you're saying about the bottom version. And I will make those adjustments, I can see them now, especially with the 'b' - it is standing out a bit too much from everything.
Thanks again :)
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