Looks awesome Florin!
8 months ago
Hi guys, after a quick discussion with my client, and some more sketching I decided to go for a bit more regular style. Criticism is highly appreciated ;)
This is looking great.
good one Mr.Capota !!!
super typo! :) felicitari!
@Deividas Bielskis , @Jord Riekwel , @Type and Signs ,@Stelian Vasile @Vitaly Ilyasov ,@Felix Diaconu , @Colin Tierney , thanks all for the nice words :)
Great calligraphy style. Awesome work!
Sexy type Florin, good stuff!
Really beautiful, I love this one. Those extended swashes are such a great touch, really dynamic. Left and right balance is excellent!
My only criticism is that I'd love to see the lower bowl of the 'B' closed a little more (maybe following the shape of the end of 's'). At the minute, the 'B' feels like it's angled/pointing up and to the right a lot more than the other letters. I think a minor edit like that would help it to follow the direction of the rest of the characters, without losing its expressiveness. (Hope that makes sense!)
Thanks @Piccsy , @Rudy Hurtado Global Branding for the nice words, @Claire Coullon i see what you are saying, will work on that part; thanks for your input, highly appreciated as always :)
@Claire Coullon , Hi Claire could you please run a quick eye over the attachement http://dribbble.com/shots/742828-Marius-Bulcau-Hair-Stylist/attachments/73882
and let me know if you feel that B is better now, i really want that stem descending there, helps a bit with the tagline positioning in regards to the name. Thanks :)
Hey Florin, sorry only just seeing this now – great update. I think the change to the bottom of the lower bowl really works nicely (and yeah, the stem is a really good touch, definitely wouldn't change that!)
7 months ago
Like it but the B looks a bit strange. "Hair Stylist" could be more prominent. Being dark and thin could serve up some problems.
Hi @Dan (Hypagraphic) yea that color is a bit to dark you are right, please take a look at the second attachment, and let me know in what way do you feel it's strange? :) cheers
@Florin Capota I'd like to see a different shape for the B. I don't think you need that downward stroke to be as prominent as it is. I feel it divides the two words and doesn't add anything to the design. The left and right swashes balance the name out.
6 months ago
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