Hand Drawn Type: Lisa

9 Responses

1. Jord Riekwel

   Rejected logo for a customer I am working for. They wanted something friendly that appeals to women. But they feel it is too feminine and not professional enough.

   This was the very first time I had a go at hand drawn type. I did get some solid feedback from the very talented @Sergey Shapiro to tweak some rough edges.

   So, I want to learn more, so I could really use your feedback. :)

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   9 months ago

2. Michelle McCallister

   I think this is very simple and lovely! I like the oval that's created with the L and a. I think it definitely meets the friendly requirement. Maybe the connector between the s and a could be lower and more natural like the one between the i and s or at the end of the a. Looks great though!

   9 months ago

3. Jackson Alsop

   Shame that the client rejected it; I really love this. Great work!

   9 months ago

4. Dave Coleman

   I really like this! No feedback from me, just some admiration :)

   9 months ago

5. Jeroen Vos

   It's great, no feedback.. leave it like this..

   9 months ago

6. Sergey Shapiro

   Not professional enough? Sounds shitty and absolutely stupid.

   9 months ago

7. Stanislav Hristov

   Nice! :)

   9 months ago

8. Robert Bree

   i think the client means with not professional enough that the logo has to look more like a business brand, this form might be to personal or individuell. As logodesign it is just beautiful, no doubt.

   9 months ago

9. Joe Nicklo

   Something about the "i" connecting to the the "a" doesn't work for me.

   Did the client not like the script? I know it's a trend to do script / hand-lettering these days but maybe that's it? If that's the case, I can agree with the client.

   9 months ago