I think the script has a wonderful feel to it, the W is fantastic. If I were to nit-pick, I would smooth out the weight transition from the dot of the i to the crossbar of the t, making it one big smooth stroke, but still hinting at the dot of the i being there. Also, the entry stroke of the A could be thinned out a bit, as it's almost the weight of a full capital downstroke and could cause recognition confusion. You may also want to add a bit of weight on the exit stroke of the r to match the rest of the lowercase glyphs.
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Hand-drawn logo option for a future Philly event campaign. How does the script lettering work?
8 months ago
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Dave Bailey
I think the script has a wonderful feel to it, the W is fantastic. If I were to nit-pick, I would smooth out the weight transition from the dot of the i to the crossbar of the t, making it one big smooth stroke, but still hinting at the dot of the i being there. Also, the entry stroke of the A could be thinned out a bit, as it's almost the weight of a full capital downstroke and could cause recognition confusion. You may also want to add a bit of weight on the exit stroke of the r to match the rest of the lowercase glyphs.
8 months ago