@Joel Siddall this is mockup n.2 because first one was little more corporate and they don't like it, so I've just tried this one and don't know if they will like it, because I see, that there is no such a same words in design feel together, if you understand :)
The colours are stunning and tie in well with the brand.
The only areas they may pick up on if anything is that more could be done with the banner (which you probably already know). Maybe you could create more of a link between the elements in the how it works section, so there is a clear process (maybe arrows or something).
Not sure if it's been said but I find those colors jarring. That grey, yellow, green, etc., just don't mesh well together as backgrounds. If the entire thing was white (with subtle horizontal rules) and the icons or headers were in the logo colors, that would be more appropriate. This reads more like a children's book in it's current state.
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Hello guys,
I have here little more from Nine Slides, unfortunately rejected.
Do not forget to check full preview in attachment :)
Cheers!
8 months ago
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Ionut Zamfir
@I'm Charlie Some clients are really crazy. Looks great!
8 months ago
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Robert van Klinken
I really like this. A lot.
8 months ago
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Aric
Great color !
8 months ago
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Nuruzzaman Sheikh
very nice!
8 months ago
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Joel Siddall
What was there reason for the rejection if you don't mind me asking?
8 months ago
@Joel Siddall To be honest, I don't know, we just don't fit together with client and he have little different point of view on design :)
8 months ago
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Ivo Mynttinen
Crazy clients are crazy.
8 months ago
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Joel Siddall
Ah I see, have they pulled the plug or are you bringing the design more inline with their ideas?
8 months ago
@Joel Siddall this is mockup n.2 because first one was little more corporate and they don't like it, so I've just tried this one and don't know if they will like it, because I see, that there is no such a same words in design feel together, if you understand :)
8 months ago
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Haziq Mir
Fuck me.
8 months ago
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Joel Siddall
The colours are stunning and tie in well with the brand.
The only areas they may pick up on if anything is that more could be done with the banner (which you probably already know). Maybe you could create more of a link between the elements in the how it works section, so there is a clear process (maybe arrows or something).
But other than that I think its great.
8 months ago
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Vilém Ries
I love the simplicity and the colours. So sad it got rejected :/
8 months ago
@Joel Siddall Yeah, and that's the thing everyone design (arrows) but we code them as an animation when you slide :)
8 months ago
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Joel Siddall
OK excellent. I take it all back :)
8 months ago
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Michal Mervart
Lovely colors.
8 months ago
Nice one man. Very cool colors.
8 months ago
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Tomas Bartko
Amazing work! I know the feeling when the client and you, as you said, "have little different point of view on design".. that sucks :)
8 months ago
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Huig van der Waal
Great simplicity.
8 months ago
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Yummygum
That red color is damn nice on the eyes. I think the green could be a little less saturated to fit in with the rest of the colors.
Love the clean look
8 months ago
@Yummygum it's right from logo :) so I don't want to desaturate it :) thank you!
8 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
Too bad, lovely design.
8 months ago
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Sean Geraghty
Gorgeous!
8 months ago
I love the green ! it's awesome :)
8 months ago
Not sure if it's been said but I find those colors jarring. That grey, yellow, green, etc., just don't mesh well together as backgrounds. If the entire thing was white (with subtle horizontal rules) and the icons or headers were in the logo colors, that would be more appropriate. This reads more like a children's book in it's current state.
8 months ago