The body copy is in desperate needs of some line-height in my opinion.
almost 2 years ago
Hi Meredith - I agree with Jeremy. Plus, I would maybe add that with the white on dark to weight of the body text feels too thin to me. by increasing your line-height and moving to a thicker weight it'll become more of a practical piece.
Thanks for sharing with us!
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Jeremy Swinnen
The body copy is in desperate needs of some line-height in my opinion.
almost 2 years ago
Hi Meredith - I agree with Jeremy. Plus, I would maybe add that with the white on dark to weight of the body text feels too thin to me. by increasing your line-height and moving to a thicker weight it'll become more of a practical piece.
Thanks for sharing with us!
almost 2 years ago