Charitable Filmaking : Mark Update 3

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1. Pro Michael Spitz

   Getting close to finally nailing this guy down. Made a few form factor tweaks on the mark this week to help with scability, etc.

   Debated whether or not to maintain the right side perforated strip, and I think it's comes down to a matter of unecessary visual complication with relativley the same conceptual payoff...

   Anyway, back in gear where I left off after 'attempting' to unplug for most of last month. Just waiting on the feedback loop, and then we'll get back down to color / typography.

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   9 months ago

2. Pro Rich Scott

   LOve this in mono! Such a sweet concept and execution Mike

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3. Pro Matt Vergotis

   Nicely done Michael. I think you're right about the perforation too. the message is still perfectly clear with it just on the one side.

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4. Pro Billy French

   Really slick. Nice work!

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5. Pro ampersandrew

   Nothing constructive to say but amazing!

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6. Pro Mike Bruner

   beautifully done, Michael. I think the balance between film and charity (the love) is in a more equal visual now. the film strip was taking over in the other. Although, very nice, I think this hits home much better.
   Welcome back, man. nice to see your stuff up and showing.
   cheers.

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   9 months ago

7. Detail Vision

   OMG!

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8. Pro Jonathan Patterson

   Wider gaps look great. Agreed, the right side doesn't need sprockets.

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9. Pro Jillian Adel

   Works really nicely. Also, I like hearts.

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10. Pro fabio perez

    I think you nailed it. It looks flawless.

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    9 months ago

11. Gavin Thompson

    I like the left perforation only. It has a nice counterbalance to have things differ slightly.

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12. Pro Kaushik V. Panchal

    great use of gestalt @Michael Spitz

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13. Pro Florin Capota

    yep, dig the updates Michael!

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14. Pro Luke Ritchie

    Love how you resolved this Mike! yea, you're right, its about reducing unnecessary visual information. And honestly i didn't even notice the lack of perforations, because my mind read it more as a symbol, and indication towards something rather than an illustration. So you nailed it pal! :)

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    9 months ago

15. Nicholas Hendrickx

    Even better! The fact that the sprocket holes are missing in the part in the back and the part on the right first bothered me. But at the same time, they make the logo less busy and less distracting.

    This definitely is better!

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    9 months ago

16. Pro Muhammad Ali Effendy

    Its nice to see you back in action Michael. Classy work my friend. :)

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17. Pro Waseem Arshad

    lovely

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18. Pro Monika Majkowska

    Nice concept :)

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19. Pro Ged Palmer

    Beautiful mark man. Single colour, one side perforation get's my vote.

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    9 months ago

20. Pro Sean Glass

    Man the curve at the top is freakin' perfect. That is one of the best things I've seen on here in a while...

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    9 months ago

21. Ryan Rushing

    Good call on removing the perforation on the right.

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22. Pro Brandon Harrison

    Yep, this is the money.

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23. Pro Tobia Crivellari 

    Simply unique logo!! Love it! +++ @Michael Spitz

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24. Pro Jord Riekwel

    This is going to be scaling very badass. Sweet work.

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25. Pro Versett

    Too good.

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