Fun with scripts

13 Responses

1. Pro Mike Arndt

   This looks much better. I love you 'y' and the way it connects.

   8 months ago

2. Raul Rincon

   reminds me of @Rogie

   2likes

   8 months ago

3. Pro Matthew Daniels

   This has a really great feel to it.

   8 months ago

4. Pro Alan Houser

   yub yub

   8 months ago

5. Pro Éric Le Tutour

   It's alive!
   On a very subjective note, I feel the loop of the “e” in staying a bit too much in the back. I'd like to feel the “e” and the “l” have been drawn in a single gesture! A bit more, at least. I just feel their curves could relate more to each other.

   8 months ago

6. Pro Matthew Smith

   @eric what do you mean by "in the back"?

   8 months ago

7. Pro Marco Moreno

   @Matthew Smith This came out great. You nailed that l to the a. Good stuff.

   8 months ago

8. Pro Trent Walton

   Upgrade!

   8 months ago

9. Nicholas Hendrickx

   Way better! The 'y' looks like it's doing a 'fist-in-the-air cheer' :)

   1likes

   8 months ago

10. Pro Rogie

    @Matthew Smith really like what you've done here. As a self proclaimed master of "R"'s, this "R" isn't really doing it for me. I love the rest, but something seems more kiddy or childish about the "R"

    8 months ago

11. Pro Chandler Van De Water

    I think fudging on the accuracy of your script and bringing the leg of the "R" out a bit might help with the "kiddy" problem. Also, something about the left side of the bowl of the "y" feels inconsistent. I'd love to take a stab at this. +@Rogie @Matthew Smith

    8 months ago

12. Pro Matthew Smith

    @rogie thanks man. Any specific suggestions? I definitely want to strengthen and not be childish. It should be youthful but robust.

    8 months ago

13. Pro Pietro Desiato

    Also, I love the choice of the colors. Well done!

    8 months ago