Some good feedback above... my only suggestion is to frame those image tiles a little more ... like throw a stroke around that whole device, maybe a top highlight too ... and a little shadow.. you know what i mean. you got it covered.
Also, have you checked out that grey background on a 4S? Like the iPad3, they have warmer tone to them so that might look a touch yellowish ...havnt looked myself but just a hunch.
Here is a cleaner and simplified approach to show the listings on the TravelAid app. On this one, you'd swipe left to see more pics on each listing. Swipe right to see a short description + amenities. If there are more than 5 amenities you could swipe up and down. Click here for real pixels.
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Thanks to @Philip Clark @David Kovalev @nick sloggett @jordan borth @lukas oppermann for all your feedback / ideas on the previous version.
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Dash
Another app in progress. More details and functionality will be revealed soon. A full view with real pixels attached as usual.
Thoughts, feedback would be awesome.
9 months ago
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Max Klimchuk
wow!))) very good @Dash
9 months ago
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Luboš Volkov
Like the header font :) nice work :)
9 months ago
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edmondyang
nice! what font is it?
9 months ago
Well done!
9 months ago
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Amanda Trimble
Love the color palette. I'd fancy up the green price dots. :)
9 months ago
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Philip Clark
My main thought was: what happens when you run out of space to show features/amenities? Looking good so far, though.
9 months ago
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Jordan Borth
Would love to see a rounded nav bar ;)
9 months ago
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Huig van der Waal
Nice, I like it. Not sure about the type you are using in both top buttons though
9 months ago
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Nick Sloggett
This UI is very mute, why? Good Work though duder! Lots of good comments above!
9 months ago
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David Kovalev
lookin great dash! only issue i'm having is the use of sarif/san-serif fonts through out. I usually like to stick to one type.
9 months ago
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Bobby Giangeruso
I would say that the green circle where the prices are sitting should have a 2px dark green stroke to sharpen it up a bit. Looks a tad blurry.
Nice work!
9 months ago
Looks dope bro... really nice textures! nice tones.
Some good feedback above... my only suggestion is to frame those image tiles a little more ... like throw a stroke around that whole device, maybe a top highlight too ... and a little shadow.. you know what i mean. you got it covered.
Also, have you checked out that grey background on a 4S? Like the iPad3, they have warmer tone to them so that might look a touch yellowish ...havnt looked myself but just a hunch.
9 months ago
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Lukas Oppermann
Why are you using a serif for the buttons (which is very unusual and foreign to the iPhone) when you have a sans serif for the title?
The buttons look fairly modern, due to the sleek block style, I think it would fit better if you use the sans serif.
Cheers
9 months ago
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Tanveer Junayed
@Dash :: Like it but it's something not going with your other works :s (Don't get me wrong bro)
9 months ago
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Danny
like the color,so quite
9 months ago
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Dash
@Philip Clark @Jordan Borth @Huig van der Waal @Nick Sloggett @David Kovalev @Bobby Giangeruso @Chris Cacioppe @Lukas Oppermann
Thanks so much for the comments guys. As I said this is on very early stages and I will be making a lot of adjustments.
@Tanveer Junayed
Absolutely not bro, that's why we post here, right? Thanks for the feedback :)
9 months ago
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Isaac Grant™
Cooooool
9 months ago
This looks seriously nice. Keep on going. Great color, typo and overall a good feel.
9 months ago
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App UI Design - TravelAid v.2
by Dash
Here is a cleaner and simplified approach to show the listings on the TravelAid app. On this one, you'd swipe left to see more pics on each listing. Swipe right to see a short description + amenities. If there are more than 5 amenities you could swipe up and down. Click here for real pixels.
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Thanks to @Philip Clark @David Kovalev @nick sloggett @jordan borth @lukas oppermann for all your feedback / ideas on the previous version.
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Let me know what you think!
9 months ago