long time no dribbbling, I've been super busy working on some exciting things here (coming soon). Anyway, I took a little break and threw together some rough logo ideas for a Living Stream church, here one of them.
This is in very rough beginning stage, so any feedback is welcomed and highly appreciated! :)
Looking very unique! I love it. I do get distracted by the loop in the "T", it keeps making me want to read an "e" there. Possibly by making the loop skinnier and/or smaller might do the trick. :)
As @Zach Roszczewski mentioned the r is looking more like an E which creates a moment of doubt as you read it. Living could have more prominence so it's not Stream Living.
That might be the most unusual 'a' I've ever seen. It's quite striking, and it works. I'm digging the split strokes at the top of the 'S' and the right side of the 'm'. Also the way the shape of the 't' mimics the final stroke of the 'm'. I agree with what others have said about the 'r'; although I recognized it right away, I do see the problem. I'm reading it top to bottom, so I don't have any trouble reading it in the proper order.
Hey dewd, that looks great, but I agree about the R. The word sure reads as Stream but my eye stumble on the R, it breaks the rhythm a bit. Love the A, very unusual.
Hey Eddi,
looks very good. The "r" is difficult to read, but there’s a wonderful type-feeling. The feeling is positive – i think that’s the main thing. The "t" is often used as a cross – I’m glad you didn’t :-) can’t wait to see more in the context of other design Elements
50 Responses (page 1 of 2)
Pro
Eddie Lobanovskiy
Hey guys,
long time no dribbbling, I've been super busy working on some exciting things here (coming soon). Anyway, I took a little break and threw together some rough logo ideas for a Living Stream church, here one of them.
This is in very rough beginning stage, so any feedback is welcomed and highly appreciated! :)
Higher resolution photo attached
Follow me on twitter
9 months ago
Pro
Zach Roszczewski
Looking very unique! I love it. I do get distracted by the loop in the "T", it keeps making me want to read an "e" there. Possibly by making the loop skinnier and/or smaller might do the trick. :)
9 months ago
Pro
Eddie Lobanovskiy
Hey thanks @Zach I do see what you're talking about, will be sure to have it fixed if this version gets chosen. :)
9 months ago
looks good. What about "a"?
9 months ago
I read this as "Stream Living", am I the only one?
9 months ago
As @Zach Roszczewski mentioned the r is looking more like an E which creates a moment of doubt as you read it. Living could have more prominence so it's not Stream Living.
9 months ago
Pro
Ronny Hummitzsch
looks, good ... but concerning the r i guess u created a news letter :-) ... may difficult to read, ...
9 months ago
Pro
Yura Yarokhovich
Oh my God. Really, it is impressive.
9 months ago
Pro
Jeff Jenkins
That might be the most unusual 'a' I've ever seen. It's quite striking, and it works. I'm digging the split strokes at the top of the 'S' and the right side of the 'm'. Also the way the shape of the 't' mimics the final stroke of the 'm'. I agree with what others have said about the 'r'; although I recognized it right away, I do see the problem. I'm reading it top to bottom, so I don't have any trouble reading it in the proper order.
9 months ago
Pro
Konrad Księżopolski
f*** awsome! I love it!
9 months ago
Pro
Sergey Shapiro
Hey dewd, that looks great, but I agree about the R. The word sure reads as Stream but my eye stumble on the R, it breaks the rhythm a bit. Love the A, very unusual.
9 months ago
Pro
Andrey Maxim
As usual...
Envy))
9 months ago
Pro
Victor Erixon
That looks amazing. Great typography!
9 months ago
Pro
Tanveer Junayed
Only issue I got here is, it's too awesome.
9 months ago
Pro
I*AM Design
Hey Eddi,
looks very good. The "r" is difficult to read, but there’s a wonderful type-feeling. The feeling is positive – i think that’s the main thing. The "t" is often used as a cross – I’m glad you didn’t :-) can’t wait to see more in the context of other design Elements
9 months ago
very cool!)
9 months ago
Pro
Sinziana Ene
Wow! I am so jealous right now :) Wonderful!
9 months ago
Simply amazing!
9 months ago
Pro
Tory Hobson
Love it... What kind of pens are you using (especially interested in the pink one)?
9 months ago
Pro
Tyler Corbett
Looks awesome! What pen/marker were you using for your original sketches? I don't think I've seen that kind before.
9 months ago
Pro
Jeremy Vessey
Love this, and everything you have on here. ++
9 months ago
Pro
David Kovalev
i like how the S and M are split open (the notch) very cool overall man! (i do agree w/ "r" loop, looks like lowercase "e")
9 months ago
Pro
Marco Moreno
Yes I saw Stream first. The style is great but that could use some adjusting. You rock @Eddie! :)
9 months ago
Pro
Zack Davenport
Thanks for the process shot, I'll have to try this method out!
9 months ago
Pro
Tobia Crivellari
Amazing as always!!! @Eddie Lobanovskiy
9 months ago