Alright, guys. Time to give some feedback on these bits. I know the hands still look a bit... well, like they look right now. Need some more effort on that. And then there are some other failures like the cassette tape and the laptop. I could probably do better.
There might be a few more icons as we continue designing the site but for now I think I've covered most of our needs.
Again, some mean criticism encouraged.
(Also attached a 32px resize for ya... you can see how ugly the two hands are like this. I just batch-resized them all to 200%, but since they're designed on a 16px grid, they should look mighty fine otherwise.)
Hello! So, here is my feedback :)
Stars: I think the first one is good, but the second has its legs different one from each other, some are more rounded than others.
Hands: I think I like the shape of the first one, but I wish the fingers were rounded at the end.
Fork and Knife: Maybe the base could be wider.
Cassettes: If you look photos, the cassettes that do not show the tape, like the one you made, have a box in the middle. I would add that and would remove the dots in the bottom. Ej: http://www.nicboo.com/sites/default/files/field/image/cassette.jpg Notebook: I think the problem with it, is that the screen looks higher than the base.
ANYWAY! They look awesome. You did a really great work with them :)
@Madelein Araya Hey, thanks so much for the feedback! A rare occasion these days here on Dribbble, haha!
You're right about the stars, I completely forgot about the other star and will definitely fix it.
About the hands, the first one is the sharpest but then again is mistaken for quite the opposite of what it is meant for. It looks like a stop or block, you see, when it's meant to represent waving to someone. It's the toughest icon of the entire bunch.
About the cutlery – I tried to have a wider/thicker base but I didn't like the way it looked. I think it's alright like this.
Yes, that's a good point, will try to play with the tape cassette a bit more. Even though we're probably not gonna end up using this. And you're also right about the notebook. Will definitely work on all of these bits.
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Alright, guys. Time to give some feedback on these bits. I know the hands still look a bit... well, like they look right now. Need some more effort on that. And then there are some other failures like the cassette tape and the laptop. I could probably do better.
There might be a few more icons as we continue designing the site but for now I think I've covered most of our needs.
Again, some mean criticism encouraged.
(Also attached a 32px resize for ya... you can see how ugly the two hands are like this. I just batch-resized them all to 200%, but since they're designed on a 16px grid, they should look mighty fine otherwise.)
10 months ago
Hello! So, here is my feedback :)
Stars: I think the first one is good, but the second has its legs different one from each other, some are more rounded than others.
Hands: I think I like the shape of the first one, but I wish the fingers were rounded at the end.
Fork and Knife: Maybe the base could be wider.
Cassettes: If you look photos, the cassettes that do not show the tape, like the one you made, have a box in the middle. I would add that and would remove the dots in the bottom. Ej: http://www.nicboo.com/sites/default/files/field/image/cassette.jpg
Notebook: I think the problem with it, is that the screen looks higher than the base.
ANYWAY! They look awesome. You did a really great work with them :)
10 months ago
@Madelein Araya Hey, thanks so much for the feedback! A rare occasion these days here on Dribbble, haha!
You're right about the stars, I completely forgot about the other star and will definitely fix it.
About the hands, the first one is the sharpest but then again is mistaken for quite the opposite of what it is meant for. It looks like a stop or block, you see, when it's meant to represent waving to someone. It's the toughest icon of the entire bunch.
About the cutlery – I tried to have a wider/thicker base but I didn't like the way it looked. I think it's alright like this.
Yes, that's a good point, will try to play with the tape cassette a bit more. Even though we're probably not gonna end up using this. And you're also right about the notebook. Will definitely work on all of these bits.
And again, thanks so much. :)
10 months ago
Fine!
10 months ago
@Ragnar Võrel You're welcome ! and you're totally right ! It's really hard to get some feedback now. But it's nice to help :)
10 months ago
Really nice mate!
10 months ago
Rebound
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by Ragnar Võrel
Still working on this set. Slow but steady. I also made it into a webfont – useful.
Also big up for @Matt Gentile for the awesome backgrounds.
Why doesn't this mentioning thing ever work?
8 months ago