Loving how this is coming together Rick! If I had one suggestion, I'd say use a lighter grey for the ampersand. It feels as though it's competing just a wee bit too much with 'Coffee' and 'Sushi'.
It was probably just my imagination, but the original sketch looked like it had a bit of depth. I saw it as being slightly embossed with subtle reflective elements.
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Worked my initial up to this, still rough & needs some tweaking.
over 2 years ago
Hell yeah man that is awesome! :) Loving how the ampersand kinda looks like an abstract cup of coffee :)
over 2 years ago
I hadn't even thought of that. I wonder if I could play on that some more.
over 2 years ago
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Robbie Manson
Loving how this is coming together Rick! If I had one suggestion, I'd say use a lighter grey for the ampersand. It feels as though it's competing just a wee bit too much with 'Coffee' and 'Sushi'.
over 2 years ago
Thanks Robbie, I am looking at a new colour pallet right now, mocha and blue. :)
over 2 years ago
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Shaun Inman
I really wouldn't sweat the lack of control in your sketches. This is awesome.
All cute baby ideas in our head must suffer through the sketchy teenage idea-phase before growing into mature handsome ideas.
I'm sure we all have photos from middle school to prove it too :)
over 2 years ago
Thanks Shaun, thats right. It's all about working your way toward something better.
over 2 years ago
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over 2 years ago
It was probably just my imagination, but the original sketch looked like it had a bit of depth. I saw it as being slightly embossed with subtle reflective elements.
over 2 years ago