Nice updates, I really like the one on the right. I love the more subtle stroke terminal at the bottom end of the leg, it feels like it matches the 'S' strokes better.
On the left 'K' though, I do really like the little stroke coming off the top of the vertical stem. It makes a nice balance with the swash at the bottom.
I think the combination that @Claire suggested would be just about perfect. I think also that the serif on the left side of the bottom leg of the 'k' would be a good choice.
You got me right here (on the previous shot). I ment the left notch on the leg of K, you’ve made it more subtle. Can’t say it is much better on the right, but it looks like the way it should go on, for me.
And agree with Claire, the top stroke was a very nice detail.
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Joluvian
What about these 2 "K", or one more mixed?
9 months ago
Nice updates, I really like the one on the right. I love the more subtle stroke terminal at the bottom end of the leg, it feels like it matches the 'S' strokes better.
On the left 'K' though, I do really like the little stroke coming off the top of the vertical stem. It makes a nice balance with the swash at the bottom.
9 months ago
Tough call, I'd say left but either way it's looking good.
9 months ago
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Tobia Crivellari
I think that both of them has really lines and shapes!! @Joluvian
9 months ago
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Sergey Shapiro
Left one, as for me.
9 months ago
Left for me.
9 months ago
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Jeff Jenkins
I think the combination that @Claire suggested would be just about perfect. I think also that the serif on the left side of the bottom leg of the 'k' would be a good choice.
9 months ago
You got me right here (on the previous shot). I ment the left notch on the leg of K, you’ve made it more subtle. Can’t say it is much better on the right, but it looks like the way it should go on, for me.
And agree with Claire, the top stroke was a very nice detail.
9 months ago