Work in progess for Bordo Bello.
9 months ago
Really nice! The only thing that seems a little off to me is the kerning/spacing of the "l Sl" in the middle. Maybe tighten the kerning of the "S" and "l" in "Slide"? Just a thought :D
I love those monster swashes! I agree with @Mike. Also, the weight of the 'e' is very light compared to the other letters.
Thank you @Mike and @Jeff these are great feedback! Yeah I was having trouble the 'e' but I will make it thicker and play with variations as well :)
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Work in progess for Bordo Bello.
9 months ago
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Mike Cummings
Really nice! The only thing that seems a little off to me is the kerning/spacing of the "l Sl" in the middle. Maybe tighten the kerning of the "S" and "l" in "Slide"? Just a thought :D
9 months ago
Pro
Jeff Jenkins
I love those monster swashes! I agree with @Mike. Also, the weight of the 'e' is very light compared to the other letters.
9 months ago
Thank you @Mike and @Jeff these are great feedback! Yeah I was having trouble the 'e' but I will make it thicker and play with variations as well :)
9 months ago