I made many changes since the initial sketch - most notably the swashes, but lots of other tweaks too. Black-and-white version without texture is attached ... for the purists :)
I like it. The swash comes a little close to the "n" and the "g" a little close "s," but other than that, I dig it. Don't notice either of these things in the b/w version though.
Thanks so much, @Steely. There's good separation in the version without texture, but in the texturized version, yeah, I get your point. I'm not sure yet if I'll end up using this particular texture. Thanks for the feedback :)
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Jeff Jenkins
I made many changes since the initial sketch - most notably the swashes, but lots of other tweaks too. Black-and-white version without texture is attached ... for the purists :)
10 months ago
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Steely
I like it. The swash comes a little close to the "n" and the "g" a little close "s," but other than that, I dig it. Don't notice either of these things in the b/w version though.
10 months ago
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Jeff Jenkins
Thanks so much, @Steely. There's good separation in the version without texture, but in the texturized version, yeah, I get your point. I'm not sure yet if I'll end up using this particular texture. Thanks for the feedback :)
10 months ago
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Jonathan Russo
Nice work! Very nice flow and congruency throughout. I really am liking the space and feel of the black and white version. But they both are sick.
10 months ago
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Jeff Jenkins
@Jonathan Thank so much!
10 months ago
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Andrew Terpening
Hey @Jeff, this is great, both versions! Love 'em! Good job, man :)
10 months ago
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Nathan Trafford
looks great man!
10 months ago
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Jeff Jenkins
Thanks, @Nathan!
10 months ago
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Analog Rules V2
by Jeff Jenkins
Here it is without the drop shadows, and with minor spacing adjustments.
10 months ago
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Tobia Crivellari
Love it!! @Jeff Jenkins
9 months ago
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Jeff Jenkins
Thanks, @Tobia!
9 months ago