Could you put the top bar of the 'I' at the same angle as on the 'E' and the top of the bowl on the 'R'? It's drawing my eye to it as it is and it detracts a little bit - love the style though, much, much prefer this to the first one!
Very nice! Do you think the 'W' could have the same upward angle as well? Might look nice, but also might be too much. Just a thought. Really at a good place with this.
This. I love the slightly quirky industrial feel. @Glen's idea is good, but it looks like an I-beam right now (intentional I assume? Perfect for a welding co.), and if you tweaked it that aspect would be lost.
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James Graves
Who's up for round two?
Take a look at the attached and let me know your thoughts! thanks guys :)
9 months ago
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Jed Bridges
Oh frigg!!
9 months ago
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Glen Thorpe
Could you put the top bar of the 'I' at the same angle as on the 'E' and the top of the bowl on the 'R'? It's drawing my eye to it as it is and it detracts a little bit - love the style though, much, much prefer this to the first one!
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Evan Huwa
Very nice! Do you think the 'W' could have the same upward angle as well? Might look nice, but also might be too much. Just a thought. Really at a good place with this.
9 months ago
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Brent Jackson
Man! I love this lettering so much – retro feel, but very unique, and it reminds me of mid-century modern furniture for some reason.
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Joseph Alessio
This. I love the slightly quirky industrial feel. @Glen's idea is good, but it looks like an I-beam right now (intentional I assume? Perfect for a welding co.), and if you tweaked it that aspect would be lost.
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Jessica Libby
Agree with Glen. This is really dope. So much movement yet so much control (if that makes sense). Mmm. Well done, love your work.
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Andrew Littmann
Much improved round 2..I think its great as is.
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Steely
Definitely looking "welded" now! Dig it!!
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Michael Sevilla
This looks much better. Great work!
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Lauren Dickens
I agree with Glen as well. This is super dope though. Great work.
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Michael Spitz
The 'R' feels a touch compact to me... Dig the overall style for sure.
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