Then I look at it closely and it kind of falls apart. The pencil doesn’t feel like it’s lying on top of the book, or that the band has risen enough to fit the pencil underneath it. You also need less shading underneath the piece of the paper, which looks like it’s lifted too far up from the book.
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Jon Roobottom
The fantastic wood texture is from Matthew Skiles
10 months ago
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Paul Lloyd
Initially: Ooooh.
Then I look at it closely and it kind of falls apart. The pencil doesn’t feel like it’s lying on top of the book, or that the band has risen enough to fit the pencil underneath it. You also need less shading underneath the piece of the paper, which looks like it’s lifted too far up from the book.
TL;DR: You need to refine the shadows.
10 months ago