Muy caliente ! @Joachim i love the flourishes and the letters style. There is juste a little something that bothers me with the leg of your "R", but nothing important :).
Wow, amazing depth. I love the shape of the 'A' in particular, there's something about the subtle curve on the right stem that just works so well.
I agree with @Vincent that there's something about the 'R' leg that feels a little cut off, but not sure what else you could do without sacrificing the spacing. (Perhaps if it were just a little heavier?) Anyway I'm really just picking at minor details here, it looks really beautiful!
@Nuruzzaman@Yoga@Ged@Tobia@Alexey@Carl@Forsuregraphic @RaitG@Neil@Jason Thank you guys for the nice comments !
@Vincent@Claire I'm not happy with this 'R' either, I tried to take as much space as I could to extend the tail over the bowl limit, but as Claire said I was stuck by the spacing. I could have make the junction of the tail heavier, or maybe choose a slightly different construction, but I don't know if it would have worked with the oversized serifs of this lettering.
Unfortunately handmade work doesn't allow any hesitation so I'll just have to deal with it and do better next time !
Anyway thank you both for pointing this out, feedback is always highly appreciated :)
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Joachim Vu
On my way making this mexican-flavored illustration !
10 months ago
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Nuruzzaman Sheikh
awesome typographic work mate!
10 months ago
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Yoga Perdana
Beautiful!
10 months ago
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Ged Palmer
Yeeeahhh!
10 months ago
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Vincent Dassens
Muy caliente ! @Joachim i love the flourishes and the letters style. There is juste a little something that bothers me with the leg of your "R", but nothing important :).
10 months ago
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Tobia Crivellari
WOW! Simply amazing sketch!! Love it! @Joachim Vu
10 months ago
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Alexey
OMG!
10 months ago
wow, seriously wow!!
10 months ago
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Forsuregraphic
Amazing
10 months ago
good letters
10 months ago
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Neil Tasker
awesome!
10 months ago
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Jason Carne
Jesusssssss.
10 months ago
Wow, amazing depth. I love the shape of the 'A' in particular, there's something about the subtle curve on the right stem that just works so well.
I agree with @Vincent that there's something about the 'R' leg that feels a little cut off, but not sure what else you could do without sacrificing the spacing. (Perhaps if it were just a little heavier?) Anyway I'm really just picking at minor details here, it looks really beautiful!
10 months ago
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Joachim Vu
@Nuruzzaman @Yoga @Ged @Tobia @Alexey @Carl @Forsuregraphic @RaitG @Neil @Jason Thank you guys for the nice comments !
@Vincent @Claire I'm not happy with this 'R' either, I tried to take as much space as I could to extend the tail over the bowl limit, but as Claire said I was stuck by the spacing. I could have make the junction of the tail heavier, or maybe choose a slightly different construction, but I don't know if it would have worked with the oversized serifs of this lettering.
Unfortunately handmade work doesn't allow any hesitation so I'll just have to deal with it and do better next time !
Anyway thank you both for pointing this out, feedback is always highly appreciated :)
10 months ago
oooO, how did I miss this! Excited to see you finish it :) ...those flourishes!!!
9 months ago