Supposed to be a poster that came with the packaging to celebrate the 20th anniversary. I spent a quite a few hours on this but it looks like I'm going to end up scraping it... I don't know where this is going.
11 months ago
This is looking so rad, don't give up on it yet!
The sky and everything is awesome in the back, those lines. The whole things is great dude. If you're losing focus try to take a step back, do some sketches of the layout and stuff to regain control :) Post for some help I'm sure some people will have some nice ideas.
The colors are amazing!
I did a project on the Hopi tribe in middle school and was immediately taken back to my sweaty-faced self with this poster. What I want to say: don't stop. The initial idea is great.
I think the issue might be his left arm. It's beautifully crafted, but it's just hanging out there. Even though it frames the copy, it's not doing anything. If it were me, I might push the Kachina to the right (read crop out arm) and flip the Arizona copy to the other side. It will sit by the tea, thus framing and giving it more importance. Good luck to you!
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