AWAC USA SCRIPT

7 Responses

1. Pro Brian Lindstrom

   Revised the spacing, line thickness and angle of the capital 'A'.

   Any other feedback is appreciated, thanks!

   10 months ago

2. Pro Jeremy Reiss

   My immediate reaction was not knowing what this spelled. Without having looked at your title, I didn't know the 'A' was connecting to a 'w'. I thought it was a lowercase 'L'. Maybe consider moving the A's horizontal connector down for a quicker read on the 'w'?

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   10 months ago

3. Pro Brian Lindstrom

   Thanks @Jeremy Reiss. I attached a file with that revision. Does it come across as more legible?

   10 months ago

4. Pro Jeremy Reiss

   Yep, that helps! The USA kind of feels tacked on. I wonder how it'd look if you end the bottom "swoosh" by the 'a' and move 'USA' up and give it the same angle.

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   10 months ago

5. Pro Brian Lindstrom

   Perfecto, thanks @Jeremy Reiss. Super helpful feedback, I'll try that as well...

   10 months ago

6. Claire Coullon

   Really nice style and the update is perfect, great suggesiton by @Jeremy Reiss. The only other thing I'd add is that the stroke on top of the second 'a' feels a little thin compared to the main lettering. I do like how the bottom part is slightly curved to fit over the bowl of the 'a' though, really nice touch.

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   10 months ago

7. Pro Brian Lindstrom

   Awesome, thank you @Claire Coullon, I was hoping you would give some feedback!

   Appreciate it, I will re-look at the weight of the 'a'.

   10 months ago