Yael, I like how you seek critiques, after all this is what dribble is all about right? I think "provisions" in this shot is a much nicer solution than using franchise as the font. This particular design meshes better than the last. Keep up the good work.
Hi @Andrew Merritt - thank you very much for the feedback. I also prefer this font. Seeking feedback is especially useful when you work in the more isolated freelance/small studio environment :)
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Yael Miller
Here is a preview of the lid (black lid with white label printed 1-color black). This goes with the previous (face) labels.
10 months ago
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Dan
Excellent type choice!
10 months ago
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Kyle Anthony Miller
Looks really nice!
10 months ago
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Yael Miller
Curious if you think I'd need to change the font on 'provisions' here to match the face label with the bolder font (see previous).
10 months ago
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Michael Hester
perfect the way it is!
10 months ago
Loverly.
10 months ago
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Yael Miller
@Michael Hester would you suggest any changes on the face labels? That was the bigger trouble :)
10 months ago
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Caitlin McCormick
Did you do the illustration?
I love this!
9 months ago
nice!
9 months ago
Yael, I like how you seek critiques, after all this is what dribble is all about right? I think "provisions" in this shot is a much nicer solution than using franchise as the font. This particular design meshes better than the last. Keep up the good work.
9 months ago
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Yael Miller
Hi @Andrew Merritt - thank you very much for the feedback. I also prefer this font. Seeking feedback is especially useful when you work in the more isolated freelance/small studio environment :)
@Caitlin McCormick - oh, no! That is the work of brilliant scratchboard artist, Roger Xavier. www.rogerxavier.com.
9 months ago