over 1 year ago
Yeah this is good!
Looking good but i think that those inputs for the mailing list look alot like buttons. A little bit of deep in the buttons would be nice too :)
Keep up with the good work.
As with all of your work, I like this a lot. Especially enjoying the header treatment and how you made it feel structured without really boxing too many things in. Now for the critique -
• It may be me but I think the logo/seal is off center.
• I'd use League Gothic over Trade Gothic any day of the week. It feels so much more solid.
• Agree with @João Borges regarding the inputs.
If it's a British basketball team I'd probably spell it Favourite instead of Favorite
• Player's name feels just a little too far away from his body
• I think I'd try to make the shop now and the search now buttons align
Love the cleanness of the typography. Did you figure out a way to do gradients on type reliably?
@Janna one thing I noticed is the Twitter logo, they have a new one that's just the bird. Download Here
I think this is a good start. I'd definitely clean up the messy edges around the player in the GET TICKETS section and the items in the STORE section.
I also noticed a few alignment issues: http://cl.ly/image/270I1u0N3W3e/o
@Joshua Krohn All the images and text are placeholder, that's why they aren't quite perfect yet.
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