First of all this looks great. However to give a few comments (just my thoughts) - The style is pretty retro, so I think the illustration should be a bit more retro as well. Try making the steps along the circle a bit shorter and maybe more square- Also try making the needle a bit thinner and slightly longer. The outer frame could be a bit thicker as well and maybe make the space between the inner and outer border/circle a bit smaller.
@Steffen Nørgaard Andersen Thanks for the advice dude! I'll definitely implement those into the next version - makes sense about the steps and needle for sure. Cheers.
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Work in progress mark for a local cafe! Any comments would be wonderful.
11 months ago
First of all this looks great. However to give a few comments (just my thoughts) - The style is pretty retro, so I think the illustration should be a bit more retro as well. Try making the steps along the circle a bit shorter and maybe more square- Also try making the needle a bit thinner and slightly longer. The outer frame could be a bit thicker as well and maybe make the space between the inner and outer border/circle a bit smaller.
Again, just my thoughts. Nice work @Kristian Hay
11 months ago
This is awesome. I love it so much...
11 months ago
@Marian Pop Thanks dude!
@Steffen Nørgaard Andersen Thanks for the advice dude! I'll definitely implement those into the next version - makes sense about the steps and needle for sure. Cheers.
11 months ago
Awesome! Beautiful color.
11 months ago
Thanks a lot @Alexandre Naud!
11 months ago
I like the execution of it for sure, at first glance I thought it was for Safari—glad to find out it's not though!
11 months ago
Cheers @Jeremy Elder!
11 months ago
Rebound
Compass Mark V.2
by Kristian Hay
Rebounding my first compass mark with changes made as per some advice from @Steffen Nørgaard Andersen on my last shot! C&C appreciated as always.
I do feel it's a little too complex so I'm working on something a bit simpler.
11 months ago