Welcome! You have a great start here.
I think you could improve this, though. Since the mic is embedded into the leather, shouldn't it have the same texture?
Also the edges at the bottom could use some bright highlights.
Furthermore, the bottom part lacks some shading.
As helpful pointers, though, you might want to drop the saturation and lighting on the leather texture, and you need to sort out the aliasing on your photo. The hinges need some work as the top side of them are bleached out too much
However, I like what you did with the pages, and think that you've got a lot of potential.
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Icon for iOS devices, hope you like it!
11 months ago
Looks great.
11 months ago
Nice debut. I'm working on something similar :) Welcome @Cerpow!
11 months ago
Great debut. Welcome to Dribbble.
11 months ago
Nice one! Welcome to dribbble @Cerpow
Good job, congrats!
11 months ago
Great work! welcome to the game.
11 months ago
Nice shot. Welcome to the team!
11 months ago
rad! welcome to the family :)
11 months ago
Welcome! You have a great start here.
I think you could improve this, though. Since the mic is embedded into the leather, shouldn't it have the same texture?
Also the edges at the bottom could use some bright highlights.
Furthermore, the bottom part lacks some shading.
11 months ago
Yes, ideed @iTem , this is one of my first icons and i didn't had time to modify it. Thanks for your feedback!(:
11 months ago
nice debut bro
11 months ago
Sweet texture!! Welcome to Dribbble!
11 months ago
Lovely! Welcome :)
11 months ago
Great debut! welcome to dribbble!
11 months ago
Great debut @Cerpow — welcome to the game!
11 months ago
hey @Cerpow, I'm loving your debut. I guess you took my icon as the basis for your inspiration: http://dribbble.com/shots/351716-Journal?list=tags&tag=journal, but that's cool...we all take inspiration from somewhere.
As helpful pointers, though, you might want to drop the saturation and lighting on the leather texture, and you need to sort out the aliasing on your photo. The hinges need some work as the top side of them are bleached out too much
However, I like what you did with the pages, and think that you've got a lot of potential.
Keep up the good work.
4 months ago