Very very very rough + preliminary design for a workflow app that Clayton Correia is working on.
Wanted to get some inital feedback on the overall look before I go into the details of kerning and line weight! (: Really hoping to be able to use the 'f' as its own mark, so trying to give it a bit of an original feel.
Hey Terra, I'm only just seeing this now so not sure if I'm too late for feedback but looking good so far! To me, that 'f' definitely looks like it could work as a stand alone mark (perhaps making it a little shorter would make it easier to use in context when it's by itself, as it would help it be more of a contained shape).
Otherwise I also particularly love the connection between the 'w-b'. I wonder how it could work to continue something similar between the 'o-w' and possibly even the 'bot'? (Although it could be too much, especially since the 'f' is separate anyway).
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Very very very rough + preliminary design for a workflow app that Clayton Correia is working on.
Wanted to get some inital feedback on the overall look before I go into the details of kerning and line weight! (: Really hoping to be able to use the 'f' as its own mark, so trying to give it a bit of an original feel.
11 months ago
Hey Terra, I'm only just seeing this now so not sure if I'm too late for feedback but looking good so far! To me, that 'f' definitely looks like it could work as a stand alone mark (perhaps making it a little shorter would make it easier to use in context when it's by itself, as it would help it be more of a contained shape).
Otherwise I also particularly love the connection between the 'w-b'. I wonder how it could work to continue something similar between the 'o-w' and possibly even the 'bot'? (Although it could be too much, especially since the 'f' is separate anyway).
11 months ago
Thanks for the feedback, Claire!! I'll definitely try out your suggestions in the next iteration :)
11 months ago