i'd switch up the bean types so it's not all the same repeated throughout? also it seems like there's a conversion issue (quarter lbs vs. lb reward) so maybe group them 4 at a time so people understand visually what this is counting.
The whole line says, "Buy 40 quarter pounds and 11th pound is on us!" They only sell prepackaged 1/4 lbs., so people have to buy 40 of them (i.e. 10 lbs. total) so they can get an entire 11th lb. free. It's a little confusing admittedly, but that's what they wanted! The locals seem to get it. :)
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This Paper Ship
Excited to be working on punch cards for our local Hillsborough, NC coffee shop, Cup-A-Joe! This is part of the very first draft.
10 months ago
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Logan Johnson
Lookin' good!
10 months ago
i'd switch up the bean types so it's not all the same repeated throughout? also it seems like there's a conversion issue (quarter lbs vs. lb reward) so maybe group them 4 at a time so people understand visually what this is counting.
10 months ago
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This Paper Ship
Thanks @Logan Johnson and @susie ghahremani!
The whole line says, "Buy 40 quarter pounds and 11th pound is on us!" They only sell prepackaged 1/4 lbs., so people have to buy 40 of them (i.e. 10 lbs. total) so they can get an entire 11th lb. free. It's a little confusing admittedly, but that's what they wanted! The locals seem to get it. :)
10 months ago