I think this is way too small and blurry to actually look at. From the looks of it you have a good concept, much like Panic's Coda 2, but you aren't executing it well enough. It looks bulgy and to me, at that size, I wouldn't think it was a leaf if the title didn't indicate it, more like a saggy balloon.
I'm sorry if I sound a bit harsh, I'm only trying to point out some of the flaws and hopefully it'll make you think more about it :)
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Matias Vad
I think this is way too small and blurry to actually look at. From the looks of it you have a good concept, much like Panic's Coda 2, but you aren't executing it well enough. It looks bulgy and to me, at that size, I wouldn't think it was a leaf if the title didn't indicate it, more like a saggy balloon.
I'm sorry if I sound a bit harsh, I'm only trying to point out some of the flaws and hopefully it'll make you think more about it :)
10 months ago
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Rolando Murillo
I always appreciate any kind of well-constituted comment so I don't mind, and thanks. :)
I know it isn't perfect yet but I need to confess it's my first photorealistic composition.
10 months ago