I'm glad your still working on your logo, it's always a challenging undertaking.
I like that your bringing more of you into the logo, but the colors don't coordinate well. Also the mix of upper and lower case doesn't work for me in this case and as Ryan asked, the I extending through the H ties the words together somewhat, but doesn't really seem to make sense, that and the tiny whitespace on the sides of it are distracting between the H, etc.
I did a quick rebound of a simple take on it. I chose colors that felt similar to yours but worked together a bit easier and stayed similar on font choice as well. Maybe just a new way to look at what your doing or a new starting place.
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Timothy Nice
I'm glad your still working on your logo, it's always a challenging undertaking.
I like that your bringing more of you into the logo, but the colors don't coordinate well. Also the mix of upper and lower case doesn't work for me in this case and as Ryan asked, the I extending through the H ties the words together somewhat, but doesn't really seem to make sense, that and the tiny whitespace on the sides of it are distracting between the H, etc.
I did a quick rebound of a simple take on it. I chose colors that felt similar to yours but worked together a bit easier and stayed similar on font choice as well. Maybe just a new way to look at what your doing or a new starting place.
over 1 year ago
Thanks for this rebound! :)
over 1 year ago