Got to agree with @Dalius Stuoka I think it's the a that throws it off a bit, the right side seems too heavy. Still great stuff with the mark and rest of the type.
How about going for a few inktraps in the "a". It could make it less heavy. I know it kinda breaks with the geometric nature of the type as it is now. But .. yeah well just a suggestion.
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Helvetic Brands
Very happy to be able to show everyone the final result now that the app is out.
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10 months ago
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Manyo
Lovelly mark.
10 months ago
Very cute.
10 months ago
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Dalius Stuoka
Very nice mark. Type seems somehow unbalanced in weight.
10 months ago
Got to agree with @Dalius Stuoka I think it's the a that throws it off a bit, the right side seems too heavy. Still great stuff with the mark and rest of the type.
10 months ago
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Anthony Lane
It's the lowercase a...
Love that mark David...the type compliments very well too.
10 months ago
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Trevor Baum
Agree with Dalius, Chris and Tony. The 'a' is too thick.
10 months ago
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Alexander Spliid
How about going for a few inktraps in the "a". It could make it less heavy. I know it kinda breaks with the geometric nature of the type as it is now. But .. yeah well just a suggestion.
10 months ago
I like that 'c' a lot, reminds me of Futura.
10 months ago
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Serge Guerriero
Good but not convincing. There are problems with the visual and typography letters "e c a t" and the letter spacing. "M r o" are balanced.
10 months ago
Really like the mark, type has a few minor issues - 'e' horizontal way thinner than the 't' horizontal and the 'a' feels 'fat'.
10 months ago
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Jose Luquin
Man, I've always been a sucker for grids, and logos, so this looks double awesome to me!
10 months ago
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Mark Gilliland
The symbol is spot on, as always, but the type in this is waaaay out. Needs more visual balance, less mathematical balance.
10 months ago
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Helvetic Brands
Thanks everyone.
10 months ago
The 'a' and 'c' feel a bit too heavy imo. I like how the bag turned out :)
10 months ago