Charitable Filmaking : Mark Update 2

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1. Pro Michael Spitz

   Wanted to post one alternative that I've been working on for this guy.

   The shadows from the last 'unbroken' version were really more of an afterthought, adapted from this breakdown for a solid black and white version.

   Yesterday I was pretty sure that I prefered the 'unbroken' version as a primary...but for practical purposes / flexability, today I'm thinking this guy might be stronger choice?

   Again, not 100% set on anything just yet (color's still flexible, etc.) but I mainly want to nail down the form factor.

   Let me know what you guys think...

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   10 months ago

2. Pro Alen Type08 Pavlovic

   I like this one much more!

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   10 months ago

3. Pro Diane Faye Zerr

   I like the previous version more, it has more of an impact than this one.

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4. Pro Josh Schott

   The blocks in the film strip and the breaks around them compete too much in this one for me. The unbroken version just seems perfect and fluid.

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   10 months ago

5. Pro Alex Parker ⇢ ☁

   I like the broken look too, but if you do the broken look, this feels a little dominated by the left side. If the orange film was "in-front" where they join at the top, i wonder how that would look?

   anyway, they all look good!

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   10 months ago

6. Pro Michael Spitz

   @Alen - Cheers bud! Tend to agree with everyone that said the shadows were unecessary... When you can get away with a single form factor across all media, in my opinion that's usually preferable.

   @Diane & @Josh - Thanks a lot for the thoughts guys. That's pretty much how I felt yesterday...but try sitting with it a bit, and get back to me ;)

   @Alex - Tried the flip and prefered this one, but again, still tweaking... Decided to go with a straight 50/50 split vs. the alternating colors for this version in an attempt to clarify things a bit given the breaks. The B/W works particularly well like this, so I think it'll come down to color balance.

   10 months ago

7. Pro Alen Type08 Pavlovic

   Agreed, and just to add, films/movies are all about dimension, space, volume and I feel all that more in this version. As you said, it will be interesting to see some other color schemes as well but done like this window of opportunity for those combinations is widely opened.

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   10 months ago

8. Pro Inka Mathew

   I vote for this one. Very clean and I still get the depth feel also.

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9. Pro Michael Spitz

   @Alen - Totally agree. Defefitnyl still have to do a bit of color exploration, but I had to get that B/W version nailed down...and of course as a general rule, that's usually where we should be working from to begin with.

   @Inka - Thanks for the vote!

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10. Pro Alex Roka

    Agreed, this one is definitely safer and will be easier to read at any size. Great work on this!

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    10 months ago

11. Pro Luke Ritchie

    Simpler.Better,faster

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12. Pro Michael Spitz

    @Alex & @Luke - Right on guys!

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13. Pro Andrea Cau

    Now is much better.

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14. Pro Philip Clark

    This one would be easier to replicate at small sizes, I imagine. Might lose the shadows w/ the first one.

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15. Pro Riley Cran

    I'm voting for this one, Michael.

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16. Lucian Mangu

    The other one looks better, but please fix the shadows... :)

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17. Tom Johnson

    This is much better. From a production standpoint, the other one would never fly in many applications.

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    10 months ago

18. Ivy Fuld

    I like the simplicity and clean lines of this, and it reads right away to me. I just think they vintagey brown and orange color palette doesn't quite work. I'd love to see some color alternatives!

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    10 months ago

19. Pro Duc

    I like this one better. good work!

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20. Pro Scotty Reifsnyder

    Really smart!

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21. Pro Brandon Harrison

    This is definitely my fav!

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22. Pro Dario Calonaci

    This one is perfect!

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23. ▲Claudiu Ungureanu

    i am with Riley. my vote too.

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24. Pro Adam Mann

    Huge improvement, this is great.

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25. Pro Jose Luquin

    Lovely design, I like it

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    10 months ago