Appeltje Eitje 2

13 Responses

1. Pro Bart Vollebregt

   Final version of the two Dutch words. 
Thanks for the feedback on the sketch! Pretty fond on how the capitals turned out. It's only practice but feedback is welcome.

   10 months ago

2. Pro Richard de Ruijter

   Heel vet geworden!

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   10 months ago

3. Pro Simon Ålander

   Damn, you're good!

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   10 months ago

4. lucas marinm

   Love that language with 'tje' words, looks gorgeous with type ;)

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   10 months ago

5. Chris Mizen

   Stunning, this is absolutely gorgeous. My only concern is that the "tje's" look more like "ye's". But legibility concerns aside, this is type porn at it most sordid and dirty ;)

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   10 months ago

6. Pro Nikita Prokhorov

   Love the flow of this piece...and nothing to add after @Chris's spot on comments!

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   10 months ago

7. Pro Michael Spitz

   Very nice.

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   10 months ago

8. Pro Tobia Crivellari 

   Lovely! @Bart Vollebregt

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   10 months ago

9. Pro Bart Vollebregt

   Thanks for the kind words everyone!
   @Chris Mizen If it was client work it should definitely be fixed but since it's practice I think I can get away with it ;) Thank you for pointing that out though, I'm a 100% with you on that!

   10 months ago

10. Pro Joachim Vu

    I absolutely don't understand what it says, but it looks beautiful !

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    10 months ago

11. Pro Joseph Alessio

    Haha I'm with @Joachim! Really great work!

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    10 months ago

12. Claire Coullon

    I'm a little late, but this came out beautifully. The 'A' is so distinctive and unique, it looks fantastic. I love the update you did to the lower curve of the 'E' too.

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    10 months ago

13. Pro Jord Riekwel

    I envy your typography skills. Mooi!

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    4 months ago