next run and more to come ... :)
11 months ago
and again i see some issues with the strokeweight ... damn
I like it a lot! Regarding the strokeweight, try making the stressed diagonal strokes (like in the A, S, and W) a bit thinner. Maybe it's just an optical thing, but they appear to be thicker. I love the lowercase italic y.
Besides some diagonal strokes being a little dark, this is looking really great Sascha. I love the very top line - amazing.
Thanks Kevin and Joe. Yes, this is the main issue, the diagonal strokes. They appeard a little bit thicker. Today is another big printout day.
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next run and more to come ... :)
11 months ago
and again i see some issues with the strokeweight ... damn
11 months ago
I like it a lot! Regarding the strokeweight, try making the stressed diagonal strokes (like in the A, S, and W) a bit thinner. Maybe it's just an optical thing, but they appear to be thicker. I love the lowercase italic y.
11 months ago
Besides some diagonal strokes being a little dark, this is looking really great Sascha. I love the very top line - amazing.
11 months ago
Thanks Kevin and Joe. Yes, this is the main issue, the diagonal strokes. They appeard a little bit thicker. Today is another big printout day.
11 months ago