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  1. Pro Maxwell Barvian Maxwell Barvian

    Check out that full view!

    Here's the first draft for a homepage I put together for the folks at elementary. Took much longer than anticipated (around 16 hours), and still a WIP, but I'm pretty happy with how it's turning out. My goal was to keep it real clean and clutter-free this time, avoiding unnecessary chunkiness and visual weight, all while conforming to their Styleguide (fonts, colors, etc.).

    As always, all feedback is welcome :)

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  2. Pro Nuruzzaman Sheikh Nuruzzaman Sheikh

    lovely work mate! especially I love the calm colors so much! great work :)

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  3. Pro Daryl Ginn Daryl Ginn

    Nice.

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  4. Pro M khalid khan M khalid khan

    Wow, you are a good designer :)

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  5. Miguel Oliva Márquez Miguel Oliva Márquez

    Looks really good, I digg the colorful top bar

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  6. Al ☯ Power Al ☯ Power

    nice. I think you could lessen the thinkness of the stroke around the lighter tablets. seems way too strong.

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  7. Pro Cosmin Negoita Cosmin Negoita

    It's slick. Congrats :)

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  8. Pro Mani Mani

    nice job @Maxwell Barvian

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  9. Louis Bullock Louis Bullock

    I wonder, does it even need the subtle gradients in the background? The only thing I would change is push the laptop hero image down just a tiny bit, apart from that you've nailed this.

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  10. Pro Maxwell Barvian Maxwell Barvian

    @Louis Bullock Good suggestion! I initially left them out, but I felt the navigation kinda got lost in the rest of the page. Plus, I'm a sucker for their brand colors :)

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  11. Louis Bullock Louis Bullock

    @Maxwell Barvian No probs. I swear though if I look long enough I see subtle gradients around the nav. Clean is definitely the way to go though.

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  12. Pro Aqib Mushtaq Aqib Mushtaq

    Lovely Work!

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  13. Vincent Gosselin Vincent Gosselin

    Visually it looks awesome. Great work. I'm not excited about the copy-writing though and just wanted to share that (I don't know if they are temporary or not?). The main tagline is "An OS without the hassle" yet the 2 big points (out of 3) below explains how to burn it (!) and how to keep your install smooth. I'd rewrite/rethink these because obviously they don't fit with the main tagline :)

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  14. Pro Ryan Downie Ryan Downie

    Is it quite nice, but for some reason it feels like a WordPress theme or something along the lines of that?

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  15. Pro Maxwell Barvian Maxwell Barvian

    @Vincent Gosselin Thanks! Admittedly, I'm not much of a copywriter, so I'm sure once the team works out the final copy we'll be able to lose the smarmy undertones :). Although "burn" refers to the process of burning it onto some kind of media device, usually CD or USB :P

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  16. Justin Roberts Justin Roberts

    Nice but reminds me a little too much of apple.com

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  17. Pro Dhiren Adesara Dhiren Adesara

    cool ~ nice !

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  18. Pro Tanveer Junayed  Tanveer Junayed 

    One of my fav web design. Very clean...some feedback:

    That green for "Register" is not hitting me up like white Login. Maybe you can play with the green button style. Color is great but just the layer style.

    Otherwise amazing!

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  19. Pro Ben Muschol Ben Muschol

    Love this!

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  20. Vincent Milliken Vincent Milliken

    The colours in the background are sick.

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  21. Ari Ari

    You are awesome.

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  22. Pro Maxwell Barvian Maxwell Barvian

    @Ben Muschol it loves you back!
    @Vincent Milliken hope you mean that in a good way :)
    @Ari right back at you :P

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  23. Pro Creative Goat Creative Goat

    We really like it, loving the colorful bar at the top!

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  24. Pro Axel Norvell Axel Norvell

    Grammar fix:
    "You could have been up and running with elementary 20 minutes ago"

    Because "20 minutes ago" is past tense. "You could be" applies to right now. "You could of been" is more appropriate ;)

    Nice design though. I feel like the shader for the split lines could be more subtle though.

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  25. Pro Maxwell Barvian Maxwell Barvian

    @Axel Norvell Thanks for the suggestion! That grammar was actually intentional, just part of the smarminess that will go away if the elementary team approves this design and the copy is finalized :P

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