Looks awesome James. If anything, I'm wondering if the type hierarchy might be better with greater emphasis placed on 'GIVE' vs. 'POOR', but that would require a bit of a re-shuffle... Otherwise, loving the illustration style, and pretty much the whole damn thing.
Looks awesome. Nice work. I have two things for ya: 1) The split face thing is cool but the darker right side pops too much, and all I see after a while is kind of an elephanty shape. 2) The cloud on the right edge, coming off the vertical line, looks either like a gun or a fist about to get Robin in the head! Dummest feedback ever, but for what it's worth :)
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James Graves
Just some advice from the man himself :)
Take a look at the attached and let me know what's working and what's not, thanks guys! :)
10 months ago
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Michael Spitz
Looks awesome James. If anything, I'm wondering if the type hierarchy might be better with greater emphasis placed on 'GIVE' vs. 'POOR', but that would require a bit of a re-shuffle... Otherwise, loving the illustration style, and pretty much the whole damn thing.
10 months ago
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James Graves
@Michael Spitz yes! that makes so much more sense definitely going to re-shuffle that crap! thanks a bunch man :)
to all: i've got like a month to get this guy done so bring on the changes :)
10 months ago
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Bouké
Hey woah, the lines are so cool! How did you round out all those corners so well? By hand?
10 months ago
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Matthew Spiel
Hot Dog. This is amazing. The texture, the clouds, the lin work. Great work.
10 months ago
Coloration just knocked my socks clean off.
10 months ago
Lovely use of line, the round edges looks great. Subtle texture just works too. Your stuff is getting better and better.
10 months ago
Looks awesome. Nice work. I have two things for ya: 1) The split face thing is cool but the darker right side pops too much, and all I see after a while is kind of an elephanty shape. 2) The cloud on the right edge, coming off the vertical line, looks either like a gun or a fist about to get Robin in the head! Dummest feedback ever, but for what it's worth :)
10 months ago
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Luke Lisi
This is so awesome James! I love the full version.
10 months ago
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Well guys, take a look and let Me know what else you see :)
Thanks!
10 months ago