Looks like the logo is too right-heavy. I would try moving the pick/shield to the right (un-aligning it with the head and aligning it better with logo as a whole).
Not sure about how right heavy it is until you drop text with it. If it was a stand alone piece I'd agree. The only thing I'd touch is the grip highlights on the bat. I'd round off the left side a bit to mimic the curvature of the bat. I love the concept though.
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Here's a logo I'm working on for a baseball team called Blues. Is there anything I should change, tweak, etc.? Please leave a comment.
10 months ago
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Matt Kauzlarich
Looks like the logo is too right-heavy. I would try moving the pick/shield to the right (un-aligning it with the head and aligning it better with logo as a whole).
10 months ago
http://dribbble.com/mkauzlarich - Thanks Matt, I had a feeling that was the case. I just wanted someone to say it.
10 months ago
Great idea with the pick in the background.
10 months ago
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Dave Turton
Not sure about how right heavy it is until you drop text with it. If it was a stand alone piece I'd agree. The only thing I'd touch is the grip highlights on the bat. I'd round off the left side a bit to mimic the curvature of the bat. I love the concept though.
10 months ago