TBH, I find the different pieces of text incongruous. I recognize you may have had no control over this, but FWIW, "harvest" sounds a bit food related, and "hand crafted" sounds artsy - neither of which I associate with Motorcycles. Is there a way to communicate the brand more clearly through text, or add some visuals to help drive the point home?
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David Cran
Another shirt for Harvest.
10 months ago
I would absolutely wear this. Nice work @David Cran
10 months ago
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Brandon Land
Nice script!
10 months ago
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Philip Clark
TBH, I find the different pieces of text incongruous. I recognize you may have had no control over this, but FWIW, "harvest" sounds a bit food related, and "hand crafted" sounds artsy - neither of which I associate with Motorcycles. Is there a way to communicate the brand more clearly through text, or add some visuals to help drive the point home?
10 months ago
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David Cran
@Philip Clark
sometimes you have to go with what the client gives you.
10 months ago
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Philip Clark
@David Cran I hear that! Nice work.
10 months ago
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Jeremiah Wingett
Very cool.
10 months ago
Love this, David!
10 months ago