Southern Life WIP 2
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So after all the great feedback (THANKS EVERYONE) here is some revised versions. Thoughts on these? Much appreciated!
11 months ago
R still feels squished. What about bringing the same ligature you have a little behind the N? Still looks great!
11 months ago
@Joel Reid word. So if I took the "lig" and pulled it out to the right a bit more maybe even notching the "n" a bit on its bottom left - right? thx for the feedback.
11 months ago
I kinda like what you did with the R....and I think I prefer the bottom version...the "the" on the top version seems unnecessary.
11 months ago
I like the bottom one best. It's clearer and easier to read. Can you use the T-E connection of the top one on the bottom one? Higher T and the right arm goes down instead of up on the top of E? Love the compactness of it. Just that top arm of E looks a bit awkward.
Forgot to say that it's great looking logo, Mike :-)
11 months ago
@Mike Jones I really like the bottom one. I also agree with @Inka regarding the top of the E - currently it just looks a little weird. Besides that, it looks great. Nice work!
11 months ago
@Mike Jones Yeah, kind of like you did with the T to the H & E, maybe do with the R to the N. Haha!
11 months ago
Mike I like the Balance you have created with the new R. Looking Sweet man!
11 months ago
Great work! I prefer the bottom version ;)
11 months ago
Amazing. Love the flow of the top design best..."The Southern Life Design Co." ...
11 months ago
Cool! Love the texture! @Mike Jones
11 months ago
LOVE IT MIKE! I think I'd pick the bottom of the two - but definitely love the style of feel of these! Great work!
11 months ago
Really love the symmetry of the "S" and "R's" curls! Really balances things out. I feel like the bottom of the two options is easier to read. Love it!
11 months ago
I wish this would have received more attention. Brother Mike, you're absolutely bawsing it.
I LOVE these. Your lettering has gone from great to insane. You're one big talented piece of manly man, bro!
Btw, I dig both, but would def go for the bottom one. Really like the harmonic flow in that one. And how "the" is there, tho subtle to the point where it's in the eye of the beholder.
11 months ago
@ Everybody! Many thanks for the feedback & props.
@Calvin Chopp thx bro! Seems like the bottom one is the consensus, I like the balance as well.
@Emir Ayouni | Growcase| Growcase you are the only one to catch the "the" lol! I mentioned that to the client, they were like....woah...lol. Thx for the kind words my friend!! Most appreciated!
11 months ago
Clever Lad.
11 months ago
Beastin', bottom one for me.
11 months ago
Yep, bottom one for me. Incredible work, Mike.
11 months ago
Love this man!
11 months ago
nice work!
11 months ago
Just now seeing these, Love it! Nice work bro.
11 months ago
The new R is sweet. The bottom logo is the winner between the two. And by the way ... the cotton "o" is incredible! Living in a former cotton mill town, this is going to be a hit for anyone in this area.
11 months ago