I dig it. The flourish that crosses the "S" makes it SLIGHTLY difficult to read at first. It might be because my eye is drawn to the dark shadow of the "w." Maybe thin the far-left shadow a tad, lose the extra "S" flourish and tighten up the space. I know it's a rough and the critique might be unwarranted; just thoughts. Pretty slick overall though.
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I have been hankering to do more custom type. It's rough, but the only way to get better is to keep at it.
10 months ago
I dig it. The flourish that crosses the "S" makes it SLIGHTLY difficult to read at first. It might be because my eye is drawn to the dark shadow of the "w." Maybe thin the far-left shadow a tad, lose the extra "S" flourish and tighten up the space. I know it's a rough and the critique might be unwarranted; just thoughts. Pretty slick overall though.
10 months ago
Not at all. No critique is unwarranted. It needs some help and all your feedback is spot-on. Thanks for taking a look.
10 months ago
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Michael Roma
Hey Bennie, keep up the custom type work! Really dig your style and your playfulness with type in general!
10 months ago