Like the playful type. I would adjust the spacing of "LAST" by nudging it to the right. The "L" is too close to the ribbon. Also, I would kern the space between the "S" and "T" so that they are close together and maybe open up the space between the "A" and "S".
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Nuruzzaman Sheikh
nice shot! love the colors :)
11 months ago
Like the playful type. I would adjust the spacing of "LAST" by nudging it to the right. The "L" is too close to the ribbon. Also, I would kern the space between the "S" and "T" so that they are close together and maybe open up the space between the "A" and "S".
10 months ago
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Kevin Jannis
Looks nice! Great choice of fonts!
10 months ago
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Virgil Pana
Great work. welcome to the game.
10 months ago
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Utopia Branding
Welcome, fellow Dribbble rookie! :) Best of luck!
10 months ago
Thanks for the feedback guys. Damon Chin - I've taken yours on board, agree, will put a new version up shortly.
10 months ago
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Hunter Hastings
Haha, nice, love it.
10 months ago
Good stuff!
10 months ago