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  1. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    I know Mr. H doesn't look as elaborate as the other letters but I also wanted to try some simple ones although I'm not sure if he's gunna stand out from the crowd. Thoughts?

    Maybe I might need to fill in the white stems with a solid black and inverse the arrows?

    11 months ago

  2. Pro Nayla Smith Nayla Smith

    This is amazing! I quite like this simpler style too - all of the details are so well thought out and perfectly placed. If you want it to be more consistent with the others you could certainly fill it in, but it looks great like this on its own too.

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    11 months ago

  3. Pro Maira Serra Marsal Maira Serra Marsal

    I like Mr. H! simple but not less charming!

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    11 months ago

  4. Claire Coullon Claire Coullon

    Such nice strokes, especially the ones come out from the right stem. Looking at this next to a few of your other ones, it does feel a little lighter because of the lack of fill. Rather than a solid black, maybe a patterned fill could work, like on Mr. R or A? (apologies if one of those is a Mrs.) That said, I do like the simplicity... Tough choice.

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    11 months ago

  5. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    Thank you @Nayla! I think as an ordinary letter it could stand on its own but not with the others I guess. Think I may rework it :)

    @Maira Glad you like my Mr.H ;)

    @Claire Thank you! I agree, I think I might need to add some decor inside those stems, it would add some spice to the Mr haha, I think A might be a Misses ;)

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    11 months ago

  6. Pro Yael Miller Yael Miller

    What about reversing like you suggested, with a linear fill above/below the crossbar and keep the arrows like you have now (in reverse)? (example of what I mean by 'linear': http://www.myfonts.com/fonts/astype/ademo/)

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    11 months ago

  7. Pro Tobia Crivellari  Tobia Crivellari 

    Amazing!! @Faheema Patel

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    11 months ago

  8. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    @Yael ah that can be an option, think I could do a full fill in on the stem with the inverse arrows. Thanks for the feedback!
    *edit - I tried it on the pc to see how it would look I think it does look better so I'm going to re-ink it and fix some of the those cross bar strokes too

    @Tobia Thank you!

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    11 months ago

  9. Pro Joachim Vu Joachim Vu

    Another great one ! Simplicity is not a problem when each element is at the right place like here. Have you thought of making your cross stroke start from the top of the right stem instead of the bottom ? So Mr.H can't be mistaken for his cousin, Mr.N ;)

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    11 months ago

  10. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    @Joachim Vu haha I'm creating a whole family, I haven't thought of that actually, that is definitely something I can try, wouldn't want Mr H look like Mr N now or that would be trouble. Thank you!

    11 months ago

  11. Jennifer Cirpici Jennifer Cirpici

    I like it! :D

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    11 months ago

  12. Pro Matt Vergotis Matt Vergotis

    Beautiful!

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    11 months ago

  13. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    @Jennifer Thank you! I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of yours!

    @Matt Thank you!

    11 months ago

  14. C is for cookie!! ;)

    10 months ago

  15. Inspired by black letter and Arabic, I think it's a little bottom heavy though but if I filled in the main stem it wouldn't look as elaborate as it does now. Also the diamonds towards the right the border around it is a little thick maybe if I made the border in the main stem thicker it could help with balance.

    Feedback welcome! :)

    10 months ago

  16. Pro Graham Erwin Graham Erwin

    Amazing!

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    4 months ago

  17. Faheema Patel Faheema Patel

    Thank you @Graham! :)

    4 months ago

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