Really cool. The letters seem to be a different weight to the "C" Even though it's a capital it should be the same weight, so it looks like one word. I love the colour though, very clean shape for the giraffe as well. Sick one!
@Logan Johnson I agree that tightening up the font weight will help. What I noticed was the tight kerning between "omp". I would slightly open up the kerning and keep it consistently spaced for all letters and the character. Hope that helps.
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Logan Johnson
First shot! Some branding that I am currently working on. Glad to be here!
11 months ago
Really cool. The letters seem to be a different weight to the "C" Even though it's a capital it should be the same weight, so it looks like one word. I love the colour though, very clean shape for the giraffe as well. Sick one!
11 months ago
This concept is just amazing :)
11 months ago
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Creative Goat
We really like it, great debut!
11 months ago
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Andrey Maxim
Looks great!
11 months ago
Haha cool! Welcome, welcome!
11 months ago
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Nuruzzaman Sheikh
great idea!
11 months ago
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James Wilson
Great first shot and welcome. I agree with @Luke Bennis, the different weights throws it off a bit.
11 months ago
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Logan Johnson
Thanks @Luke Bennis and @James Wilson for the feedback on the "C," you're both definitely right and I'll make adjustments to it.
And thank you everybody for the warm welcome!
11 months ago
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Maciej Jasiński
love the 'C' ! :)
11 months ago
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Georgiy Tokarev
good idea man=))
11 months ago
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Virgil Pana
Great work! Welcome to the game.
11 months ago
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Kevin Jannis
Sweet!! Welcome dude!
11 months ago
Good idea. Love it!
11 months ago
@Logan Johnson I agree that tightening up the font weight will help. What I noticed was the tight kerning between "omp". I would slightly open up the kerning and keep it consistently spaced for all letters and the character. Hope that helps.
11 months ago
fun, yo!
11 months ago
it needs small refinements, but it looks stunning!
11 months ago
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Utopia Branding
Welcome, fellow Dribbble rookie! :) Good luck to you!
11 months ago
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Ryan Vancil
ha, this is so killer! awesome debut!!
11 months ago
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Logan Johnson
Thanks again guys!
I appreciate the feedback @Jef Lippiatt and @▲Claudiu Ungureanu!
11 months ago
Rebound
Chomp Identity
by Logan Johnson
After applying the feedback received from my initial shot, I made some adjustments and then finished the identity for Chomp. Had fun doing this one.
11 months ago
This is great! Love the colours
10 months ago
hah, nice!:)
10 months ago
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Logan Johnson
@Rob Simpson , @Ivaylo Nedkov Thanks guys!
10 months ago
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Edgar Vargas
Is this font Airplane?
10 months ago