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Gedy Rivera
I've been working on a logo concept for a cool project. The goals were: typographic & not churchy (though it is related to prayer).
Logos are not my strength so I welcome all feedback.
With some of the edits from the feedback below: http://cl.ly/c860badb589413839aab
over 1 year ago
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Joel Glovier
Typography is excellent. Concept is sweet too. Clearly logos are not not your strength. :-)
over 1 year ago
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Ismael Burciaga
I LOVE THIS. I would prob make "FOR THE" a tad bit thicker. Other than that this is beautiful. Cant wait to see it in action.
over 1 year ago
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Chris Young
Nice one Gedy.
'Stars' feels like it could be nudged up a wee bit, or maybe done all lower-case, and the kerning on 'PRAY' needs a bit of work..
over 1 year ago
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Gedy Rivera
I totally love your feedback guys. Keep it comin'.
over 1 year ago
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Chandler Van De Water
I'd tighten up the kerning between the r and the p and space it out between the r and the a.
over 1 year ago
Lovely.
I agree with everything everyone has said about spacing in PRAY, I love the type choices. Maybe just tapering the tail end of the last s in Stars it seems weird being kind of blocked at the end now.
over 1 year ago
I agree with Chandler but other than that this is a great logo.
over 1 year ago
its very nice Gedy! I like the font you used for Stars :)
over 1 year ago
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Gedy Rivera
Thanks ya'll. If you look at the revised version (link in first comment), you'll see that I adjusted the kerning.
I really appreciate your feedback.
over 1 year ago
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Ryan Rushing
The new version looks great Gedy.
This makes me curious as to what type of "stars;" Movie Stars? Porn Stars? Pawn Stars? Actual stars? All of the above? :)
over 1 year ago
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Vin Thomas
Great logo Gedy.
over 1 year ago
As Steve Jobs would say, this "just works." Love it.
over 1 year ago
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Gedy Rivera
Thanks All. Ryan, from what I understand it's anyone in the entertainment industry, hollywood, music, sports, etc.
over 1 year ago
This just in: It is awesome. Love the gray, the typography, everything, superb as always girl.
over 1 year ago
cool typography
over 1 year ago
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Sacha Greif
Nice typography, but why would the stars need us to pray for them? Seems to me they have it pretty good already…
Also, it might be a little cliché, but maybe you could try referencing the Walk of Fame by adding an actual star somewhere?
over 1 year ago
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Gedy Rivera
Sacha, you'd be surprised how much pressure they are under and what they go through behind closed doors. Sometimes, they too, are forgotten. But that's besides the point since I'm simply the designer. :-)
I thought about that and love the idea but was kind of blank as to what I could do with it. I'll think of some options.
over 1 year ago
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Sacha Greif
How about putting the "for the" inside a star shape? Although the logo is already perfectly fine like this.
over 1 year ago
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Joel Glovier
@Sacha about why would "the stars" need prayer? Think of it this way: the way we treat celebrities in the US is more like being a god in other cultures. Plus the world revolves around many of them - or at least many think it does. So if you think you are god and you are not, and you think the world revolves around you (when it does not), you def need prayer. :-)
Little tounge in cheek there, but seriously if you look to the Scriptures for truth, they would unpack it this way: those in this world who are TRULY blessed are not those who are rich, powerful, and beautiful, but those who are rich in faith, love, compassion, gentleness and whose heart and inner spirit is lovely. And most often they happen to be the poor of this world, powerless, and (outwardly) unattractive.
over 1 year ago