The Six Pack

14 Responses

1. Pro Ryan Gonzalez

   Hello, Dribbble. :)

   Self-critiques: The shadowing on the right side of the "K" is a little sloppy. Most of the shadows aren't as defined as a would like. The line-work in general is a little too loose for my liking. I think I need more baking time to get my lines more straight.

   11 months ago

2. Morati Moloto

   Don't worry bout the lines they're fine, plus not everyone's perfect.This is quite cool,nice debut.

   11 months ago

3. Pro Ryan Gonzalez

   Thanks @Morati Moloto!

   11 months ago

4. Pro Isaac Weisman

   Critique: Don't be so hard on yourself man. Keep pushin' yourself and sooner or later your talent wil catch up with your taste.

   Welcome to dribbble :)

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   11 months ago

5. Pro Nuruzzaman Sheikh

   love typographic work mate!

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   11 months ago

6. Pro Ryan Gonzalez

   @Isaac Weisman I'm hard on myself so I can get better :)

   Thanks for the welcome!

   11 months ago

7. Pro Creative Goat

   I think it looks pretty nice, would like to see how you improve it tho :) Nice work @Ryan Gonzalez, welcome to the community!

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   11 months ago

8. Pro Ryan Gonzalez

   Thanks, @Creative Goat! :)

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   11 months ago

9. Pro Fabio Benedetti

   @Ryan Gonzalez nice debut man, welcome around!

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   11 months ago

10. Pro Kevin Jannis

    Really good debut! Don't worry about the shadow, you'll get them right ;)

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    10 months ago

11. Pro Emory Cash

    Nice shot. Welcome to the show!

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    10 months ago

12. Pro Ryan Gonzalez

    Thanks @Emory Cash!

    10 months ago

13. Pro Utopia Branding

    Welcome, fellow Dribbble rookie! :)

    10 months ago

14. Pro Ryan Gonzalez

    Likewise, @Utopia :)

    10 months ago