Sig Comparison

20 Responses

1. Pro Ryan Hamrick

   Thanks for the awesome feedback, all!

   Here's the new version with a comparison overlay from the last one in a red stroke (big version attached again, with comparison, also)…we'll just say I changed a few things. :)

   11 months ago

2. Pro Simon Ålander

   Great improvements, Ryan! To all of the above-mentioned - Respect for the superb feedback. This is how Dribbble should be used. Feel the love and absorb the knowledge!

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   11 months ago

3. Pro Ryan Hamrick

   @Simon Ålander - Thanks, buddy. Much appreciated. :)

   11 months ago

4. Pro Simon Ålander

   Have you tried to make the "y-H" loop a little bit smaller/thinner? I think it looks too heavy as it is right now. Just a thought.

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   11 months ago

5. Pro Ryan Hamrick

   @Simon Ålander - You know, I did play with that a lot early on because I thought the same thing, but when I made that smaller, it felt unbalanced with the other side. But that was when the upper loop of the 'k' was a lot bigger. I'll have to play with that some more now that things are a bit lighter on the right side.

   Good call, man!

   11 months ago

6. Pro Florin Capota

   late for the other one, great improvements here;
   I agree with @Simon Ålander about that loop also feel it could be thinner, also another thing that feels a bit too thick for me is the R swash, right before it gets connected with the H, i feel that portion could be thinner a bit. Cheers!

   11 months ago

7. Pro Simon Ålander

   Well, this is already a solid signature with a lot of character. You should definitely pat yourself on the back!

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   11 months ago

8. Claire Coullon

   Wow, terrific updates. It's great to be able to see that overlay directly on top, so many changes! (I've also just spent far too long watching it switch between the two). Great revision the 'n' in particular, you've maintained its beautiful shape and curvature but it no longer looks like it's trying to squish your last name. Really expressive piece overall and seconding @Simon about the pat on the back!

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   11 months ago

9. Pro Glen Thorpe

   'R' looks so much better now Ryan and I love the subtle change on the 'K', great work!

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   11 months ago

10. Anna Ropalo

    Turned out fantastic! Really loving that 'k' and the overall flow and interaction of the entire piece. Beautifully done.

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    11 months ago

11. Pro Ryan Hamrick

    @Simon Ålander & @Florin Capota - I'm not going to just keep posting this thing all weekend, but I played with the 'y' a bit more and I love it now. Better? - http://ha.mrick.me/HnUk

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    11 months ago

12. Pro Ryan Hamrick

    @Anna Ropalo - Thanks, Anna!

    @Claire Coullon & @Glen Thorpe - Couldn't have done it without you guys, thank you!

    11 months ago

13. Pro Simon Ålander

    Much better. R and H are now easier to read as well. Good job!

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    11 months ago

14. MACK

    Awesome!

    11 months ago

15. Pro Ryan Hamrick

    @MacK - Thanks, man!

    11 months ago

16. Pro Joseph Alessio

    Firstly, what were you doing awake at 2:00 AM!? Secondly, it's amazing what the little details will do. This version looks so much more open, reads better, and more balanced, just with small changes. Great stuff!

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    11 months ago

17. Pro Ryan Hamrick

    @Joseph Alessio - Shoot, I was up 'til like 3:30. Why? Who the hell knows, lol. And yeah, it's funny. When I was working on it, it didn't feel like I was doing much of anything, and then when I put that overlay over it, I was like Whaaaa?!? :)

    Thanks, man.

    11 months ago

18. Pro Neil Tasker

    now your really talking, loved the other one, love this one more, great work dude.

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    11 months ago

19. Pro Ryan Hamrick

    @Neil Tasker - Thanks, Neil! Very happy with it now. :)

    11 months ago

20. Pro Brendan Pittman

    Legit.

    11 months ago