Much better :)
Is "Tech & Media" properly centered, though? Look a bit off to me. Also, the cloud icon and 22° seems a bit darker grey than the date.
Excuses voor het mierenneuken ;)
- Why is the vertical bar between the date and the weather there? Isn't the icon enoug?
- Is the shadow around the navigation needed? If so, maybe a bit more subtle?
- The grey on the dark-blue feels a bit dirty. Maybe add a hint of / opacity?
- The dividers are supposed to have some inset? Could the bar do without?
- Could you space the navigation items to the width of word instead of a fixed width?
- Some CAPS are nice, but you're using it on three different occasions. Play around with it maybe?
Really like what you've done here. I agree with some of @Wes Oudshoorn's comment above in regards to the grey text on the blue buttons. I'd prefer a blue color instead.
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Wouter de Bres
Navigation for a news website.
Let me know what you think!
JUNI supposed to be JUNE by the way :)
11 months ago
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Maciej Jasiński
the ampersand makes the bar totally crazy ! great one :)
11 months ago
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Max Steenbergen
Much better :)
Is "Tech & Media" properly centered, though? Look a bit off to me. Also, the cloud icon and 22° seems a bit darker grey than the date.
Excuses voor het mierenneuken ;)
11 months ago
Would take a second look at the following:
- Why is the vertical bar between the date and the weather there? Isn't the icon enoug?
- Is the shadow around the navigation needed? If so, maybe a bit more subtle?
- The grey on the dark-blue feels a bit dirty. Maybe add a hint of / opacity?
- The dividers are supposed to have some inset? Could the bar do without?
- Could you space the navigation items to the width of word instead of a fixed width?
- Some CAPS are nice, but you're using it on three different occasions. Play around with it maybe?
Trying to be constructive! Keep it clean ;-)
11 months ago
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Shaun Moynihan
Really like what you've done here. I agree with some of @Wes Oudshoorn's comment above in regards to the grey text on the blue buttons. I'd prefer a blue color instead.
Overall, looking sharp!
11 months ago
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Deepak Jose
liked it.
11 months ago
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Kartik Mahant
I think @Wes Oudshoorn and @Shaun Moynihan are right, and also i think the shadows are bit to hard, maybe a bit soft shadows will look more effective.
11 months ago
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Wouter de Bres
@Kartik Mahant ✦✦✦ @Shaun Moynihan @Wes Oudshoorn @Max Steenbergen Thanks guys! Appreciate your feedback...now working on an improved version :)
11 months ago
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Francesco Improta
Which meteo icon set did you use?
7 months ago
what font did you use? @ Wouter ● Bread&Pepper
7 months ago
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News navigation
by Wouter de Bres
Working on the navigation of a news website.
7 months ago