Argh beautiful work Sergey! I'd have to agree in part with @Stéphane Reverdy though, there is something mildly off-putting about the small text - but I can't put my finger on it. Maybe just tweaking the spacing above it, so it aligns better with the stroke underneath 'Heretics'? Otherwise, this looks MINT.
The balance here is truly amazing @Sergey. I love how the curl on the 'r' pops up above the x-height. And the 'ti'? I think what others have pointed out about the smaller text is good advice, although I really dig where you're going with the arm on the trailing 'E'. Again, the balance is just so, so good.
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Sergey Shapiro
Working on a t-shirt lettering for Heretics www.heretics.co.uk/
Need some more tricks.
WIP.
UPD. Rejected
11 months ago
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Dalius Stuoka
Sergelicious.
11 months ago
Sick sick sick
11 months ago
r is fantastic:)
11 months ago
yes, very nice!
11 months ago
If I had to critique something, it would be the bottom part, the "make your own choice' bit.
As it is now, I'd rather not have it actually. Maybe its too close to the lettering or something like that, but it disturbs me a little.
The lettering is gorgeous by the way.
11 months ago
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Henric Sjösten
Sick type as always, buddy! What a weird name for a t-shirt co. ;)
11 months ago
Loving this buddy!
11 months ago
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Florin Capota
ahh, a treat to see this, love the way you mirrored the s swash with the H line, great thinking; as always superb work!
11 months ago
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Matt Vergotis
Agree with @Florin Capota. my other favorite part is the 'et' ligature. gorgeous stuff
11 months ago
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Dave Coleman
Argh beautiful work Sergey! I'd have to agree in part with @Stéphane Reverdy though, there is something mildly off-putting about the small text - but I can't put my finger on it. Maybe just tweaking the spacing above it, so it aligns better with the stroke underneath 'Heretics'? Otherwise, this looks MINT.
11 months ago
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Muhammad Ali Effendy
@Sergey Shapirodo you know its sexy work by you ?
11 months ago
lovely work, Sergey
11 months ago
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Sergey Shapiro
@Dalius Stuoka @Forsuregraphic @Yana Makarevich Thank you!
@Stéphane Reverdy @Dave Coleman Got it. Will work on later, need to get the client's feedback at first. Thank you for your comments guys!
@Henric Sjösten Thanks mano!
@Jonny Delap @Florin Capota @Matt Vergotis @Pavel Pavlov Thank you for your words buddies!
@Muhammad Ali Effendy I'm sexy and I know it:)))) I didn't but I do now)))
11 months ago
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Kreativa Studio
Nicely done!
11 months ago
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Vadim Sherbakov
So cool!
11 months ago
LOVE this! I guess I agree with those who say it would be even more appealing without the accompanying text, but it doesn't ruin it by any means.
11 months ago
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David Kovalev
perfect!
11 months ago
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Matt Gentile
Very nice!
11 months ago
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Jonathan Russo
Sick work, love it
11 months ago
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Joshua Bullock
The balance here is truly amazing @Sergey. I love how the curl on the 'r' pops up above the x-height. And the 'ti'? I think what others have pointed out about the smaller text is good advice, although I really dig where you're going with the arm on the trailing 'E'. Again, the balance is just so, so good.
11 months ago
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Jérémy Paul
I read Heretica, sorry. So I thought you made an anti-Helvetica font (understand anti-christ) :P
Apart from that it looks gorgeous !
11 months ago
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Sergey Shapiro
@Jérémy Paul Anti-Helvetica/Anti-christ? Sorry, didn't get this humor. Thanks though.
11 months ago
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Simon Ålander
Mad fresh!
11 months ago
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Sergey Shapiro
@Kreativa Studio @Vadim Sherbakov @Mike Krisza @David Kovalev @Matt Gentile @Jonathan Russo Thanks guys!
@Joshua Bullock Joshua, thank you for your feedback!
11 months ago